You're Mine

Excellent poem.
I love it when they are short, sweet and to the point.
I mean long poems are nice to but sometimes you can express it so much better with less words.

"Shudder from your touch.
These emotions,
They are just
Too much"

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Yup, sometimes that is how I feel with my fiance, and it is a nice feeling to have, well usually. great portrayal of emotions there.

"I feel the urge:
The fire and heat.
I need your kiss:
Delicious and sweet."

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haha OH I have to agree on that one as well. Sometimes you get those urges and nothing will satisfy you except them. can totally relate to that. well done with that section.

"Shiver down my spine
From the way you
Simply say
'You're mine.' "

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The ending? Perfect. It was a great poem and I get that happy with my boy as well. Knowing he is mine and no one elses.

great poem
I said it already but it is

well done
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so sweet and true. it got to the point and was short and very sweet. =D Nice flow. I ,3 the last stanza.

I like the short sweet simplicity of it. magnific!

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Wow lovely really :D
i quite adored it!
5/5 love.

Beautifully written. I'm normally used to reading longer poems but this one is still really good. Keep on writing

cesar