Gem
I love this!

Fly, fly. Your finally free
Fly across the land and sea
Fly, fly. Towards the light
Go now, the time is right

Can't wait !
Take care love Cindy

I love how you are inspired by so many things in life. You bring so many of your poems to life.

BTW, very nice new picture.

Very nice, Gem...you manage to work magic with your words once more. Good job!

~~Rikki, aka SSS~~

This was so peaceful and soothing to read. I really enjoyed this Gem. For me, I could relate it to struggles that I am currently going through.

Gem I interpreted this poem as maybe a child or person with an illness letting go and moving on to a better place.
I think sometimes our mood or personal lives have a lot to do with how we may interpret a poem ...

Excellent read sweets!
Loved the ending stanza and the repetition of the Fly, fly.
Take care
Luanne

''Fly, fly. Your finally free
Fly across the land and sea
Fly, fly. Towards the light
Go now, the time is right ''

I love that stanza, I thought it was very pretty and it created vivid pictures for me.
The flow is wonderful throughout, and I found this poem to be inspiring.

Thats such sweet heart warming poem ,so many times i wished i could glide with graceful wings like blessed birds but lol we only have machines to substitute :P

Wonderful poem. The flow was excellent and the rhyming wasn't forced.
I loved it. 5/5

|Sarah|

Excellent poem, another outstanding poe of yous, it had an amazing flow and good creativity. Nice job.

I liked this. It made me smile and was a really uplifting poem. I especially like how the end really tied the whole piece together. You have a talent, and I really do believe you can go with it. ^_^

Luved it

Luved it

"Fly upon the gently breeze" (sic) (= Did you mean gently or gentle? If it's gentle, I remember you made this mistake in the past. Otherwise, my bad. lol.)

"Always remember, your not alone" (sic) (= You're is mispelled here.)

"Fly, fly. Your finally free" (sic) (= You're is mispelled here, again.)

I believe this piece can be interpreted in different ways. But this is simply beautiful, as always; it uplifts one's troubled soul through reading it. It shows how everything won't end when times get rough, but how everything gets better and better as you grow up and learn things in life.
Wonderful work, as always, Gem! :D
Thanks for sharing.
Love,
Debbie

P.S. This is my new account now. The mods suddenly suspended mine. *sighs* Oh, well, take care hun!

Oh I loved this piece. Very charismatic but also, I associated it with the death of someone, and their freedom at no longer being in pain yet this is tinged with sadness.

An excellent read!

Oh I loved this piece. Very charismatic but also, I associated it with the death of someone, and their freedom at no longer being in pain yet this is tinged with sadness.

An excellent read!

This poem flies into the skies of creativity and skill! I loved this poem.
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This poem is really great. It cheered me up! lol thanks so much! keep writing please!!!