I LOVE this poem! But, I hate this feeling :l
I feel this way about my best friend Rob, and he knows, only now we're not best friends anymore :l :l :l :l
Anyway, great job and 5/5. Keep it up!

AWESOME POEM!! one of your best, this rocked it. I loved it sooo much well done... left me speachless 5/5!! straight up that was awesome : )

I really loved this poem...
wow. i think it is really really good
keep up the good work
you are extremely talented
<3jess

Its great!!
you really are a good poet...
hope to read more of your poems...
keep up your marvelous works!!

I want to taste your lips
I want to feel your skin
I can feel it deep inside
I can feel it deep within

it was filled with so much emoiton! keep up the good work!

This poem is interesting. Second stanza isn't good like the rest ones and last line in fourth stanza completely trough me off ( it looks like you wrote it only because it rhymes) It isn't bad but it could be better. Atmosphere should be stronger but emotions are expressed greatly. 4/5

I feel the same way..
But he kinda kwnows..
And i know..
The problem is he's far away..

NIce poem*

I can relate to this so much i think most girls/women can - beautiful writing!

That last stanza was simply fantastic way to tie up your piece great work- raindrops 5/5

I love the title,..and i love the poem too,.its so nice,specially the last stanza,.

This poem was really good. Although it could be written a little better... the flow was great and the word choice was good. This concept was very deep... I really felt that you were in love while I read this. It's good to have a reader feel you in a poem. Good write! 5/5

Ya you right you know and he know but it hurt us more than he know, beautiful again you got the talent to be a good poet keep write and never stope

Poem was good. I like the way you expressed your feelings. Good job! :)