One last wish

by Nikki   Apr 13, 2007


I wish to be with you,
with you until the end,
to hold hands with you,
to laugh with you,
to hold you in my arms,
to be with you through thick and thin,
to be your #1,
to be the light that lights up your life,
to be your little sunshine,
to make you happy when having a bad day

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  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    It was good, u know, but it wasn't like a WOW poem...
    4/5
    ***aLy***

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Oohhh.. Love poems are so cute ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I think it's really cute, and short. I love poems that are cute and short. :D
    I didn't like you did # 1 instead of number one, but oh well. :/ Just my thoughts.

    Good Job. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Great poem, very touching, flowed well. Keep it up!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    It a really good poem but yet so touching.. I love the word choices good job but....it feels like it needs something to it though... even though You are a GREAT writer.. Im gonna let you figure out how to change your poems.. to become THE BEST.. kay well gl and keep up the good work!! 4/5

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