Scared of love? maby...

by michelle   Apr 13, 2007


I loved you more then ever before.
and you broke my heart.

i didn't know what to do
i wasn't all that smart.

so i just turned and ran away
to scared to tell anyone
what i wanted to say.

i wanted to yell i hate you
but all i wanted was to love you

i wanted to yell i love you
but i couldn't i wanted to hate you

i wanted run away from you
but i just wanted to be in your arms

i wanted to jump and hug you
but i couldn't i needed to get over you.

you would wake by me
and say hi
i would just look at you
give you no reply

so that day came and i was over you
it took forever
but its what i had to do.

so soon you became to love me.
oh boy that wasn't my cup of tea.

i didn't know how to end this one
SO PLEASE JUST COMMENT!!!
AND RATE! please!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karissa

    =[[
    SHELL
    I love this one soo much
    I can relate like most you write
    I love it soo much
    im here for you

  • 17 years ago

    by dbaby

    "you would wake by me
    and say hi
    i would just look at you
    give you no reply"

    <br><Br>
    this is your strongest stanza you should write more like it good job otherwise definitly needs a strong ending to tie everything together so that the reader understands what the poem is about

    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    Well, as for the ending, I have a question. Is this based on real life? Because in that case, you may not know the ending toit yet. It's great how it is. I really felt what you were saying with that last set of lines.

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