Look at what you've done to me

by Kersten   Apr 14, 2007


Look at what you've done to me
you've made my heart whole
you told me you loved me
yet you had her wondering on you mind

Look at what you've done to me
you broke my heart in two
you told me loved me
yet I didn't no that i was going to be the one to lose

Look at what you've done to me
as i lay on the floor cold
you told me you loved me
but it was a lie so now i take away my soul

I hope you happy
for what you've done
you let me die because of her
just look at what you've done.

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  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Really good poem. I would suggest fixing the word issue, you forgot to add words in places and you need to switch some around like:
    "as i lay on the floor cold"
    it should be:
    "as i lay on the cold floor"

    I hope this can help you a little.

    <UnToLd TrUtH>

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I can relate to your poem its nice 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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