by Gothic Girl in Pain Apr 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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My heart is sad and so am I. It hurts so much that it pains me to look into your eyes. To look into your eyes, is like being in a dream. And it just brings |
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For I know what I would say, would not |
by BlAcK RoSe
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Need to flow better in the middle but a very good write well done |
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Very nice structure i know how you feel, Im going through the same thing. But you might want the middle to flow a little better, from the heart i loved it 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |