Suicide Note

by gorgeous girl   Apr 14, 2007

As the silver blades slid on my wrist
I think of everything on my death list
As the blade keeps cutting
the less I realize its something bad
As the pain takes over
and the tears keep going
I hear a voice
A voice I can't make out
I finally collapse with no feeling at all
no pain
no light
no nothing
What have I done , I commited suicide
There was no tomorrow
And no one cares that I am dead
That is why I ended my life


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  • 13 years ago

    by heartbrk1

    Well shut my mouth

    that was......that was deep

  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla

    I love this one. Like I said before I love reading poems like this. Please don't commit suicide though. I really love reading your poems! I know how you feel though. I've tried commiting suicide to and I SI. <3-Kayla

  • 13 years ago

    by barbara

    This is another really sad but really good poem...just remember that someone always cares....even when it doesnt feel like it....

  • 13 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    Wow I tried to commit suicide about a month ago over spreak break.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is a great poem. I'm going through the same thing. I tried to comit suicide about 3 months ago, but about 2 months ago I found a reason to live for. I have a new boyfriend now and he hates it when i cut myself, but all he cares about is that I get through it and he still loves me even though I'm ugly and fat.

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