Grant me some sense

by katie!   Apr 14, 2007


Shhh, do you hear anything? Anything at all
For I cannot breach the silence of this tragedy
You seem to be mouthing at me, as I hear no words
But I must be wrong for others cannot hear me

It's weird really, the right path, to me, seems so.. wrong
No beautiful walk to a divine light, or wonderful prize
Just a dark path, without a world to turn to or hide
I do not want to be forced to walk when I wish to fly

The Rolling Stones insist on telling me daily
"You can't always get what you want" Which I know
So I wind up sitting next to a new age shakespeare
Finding a new way to tell them "No"

A million cryptic messages, and a thousand unheard sounds
Stuck between another metaphor when all I need is truth
My poetry is empty for the words cannot be said
Another way of avoiding admitting to them I love you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW this stanza speaks so well to me, the flow was great .love your style , great poem keep up the good work will be reading more , your friend Tracy~5/5~

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    KATIE!!!! OMG your still on P&Q? I left for a little while but am back now, not sure if you even remember me lol we used to do the forums, when we got 'bullied' by the wolf pack, you me and lost girl, your poems still inspire me!! back on my favourites list for you lol

    xoxo Lucy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Katie ... I am so happy to see you writing again. I miss your e-mails sweet Katie and hope all is well.

    Just a dark path, without a world to turn to or hide
    I do not want to be forced to walk when I wish to fly
    ^^^
    Oh Mercy these lines are touching ...

    Take care dear one and know I hold you in my thoughts and prayers sweets.
    ((((HUGS))))
    Luanne