Great poem, it seemed like every line was written to be alone, do you get it? lol I dont know anyways...

"Ashamed of what I have became
Smashing the mirror into pieces"

^^Love those lines!! 5/5

Wow... for such a short poem, this one hit home for me. I loved it! I can relate ALOT aswel. Ive smashed a mirror before... wasnt a very pretty day... Anywho... lovely job! 5/5

Natalie``

LOVELY! i especially loved this part
"Everyone doesn't know that I
Drive only to crash"
5/5 love.

Another great poem and another great choice of poetry style writing im very impressed very good job ur a great writer keep it up

Wow... you are quite a talented poet!!! very good, 5/5

Allanah

This was a really good poem, you started off like a story, and it began to build up, then all of a sudden, it ended. That was pretty good for having such a few lines to work with. Good job on this poem!..

I like it and I love the meaning and originality in this poem. You did a fabulous job! Keep it up!

I lived this poem, it's amazing, thank you for sharing

Yup,another tormented soul....

I really like it. The last two lines make a really good effective ending.

Not seen that many acrostic poems that can get a message across as well as this one did =] 5/5

Ohhhh this was so sad but beautifully written at the same time.
I thought it flowed well throughout, and though short, it was packed with emotion and depth.
A wonderfully written acrostic!

Deffinatly better than what I do.
I can't get these acrostics.
LoL. You did a great job on this one.
Thank you for commenting my poem.
It was greatly appreciated.
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy
^__^ily

That was an amazing poem. Really powerful, the last line drove (Pardon the pun) into me. Really amazing writing once again.

Sole. x

This is a great poem I especially like the last 2 lines:

Everyone doesn't know that I
Drive only to crash

Very good job, I am going to be adding you to my favorites...5/5

Great poem!! these kinds of poems are kinda hard to do.. please keep writing!
(i reviewed this one becasue i had already done *The Reason*)

Wow I love this.. Very touching and emotional.. I especiall liked these two lines...

"Ashamed of what I have became
Smashing the mirror into pieces"

Great write, keep up the good work, and thanks for your comment. =)
-Ally