I liked this poem alot i found it to be quite interesting and enjoyable to read. Kept me interested from start to end. Well done with this nicely written piece of poetry~mel

This is more like what i was looking for. quite a good poem. i like how you deal with this subject. and i feel i can relate to this poem.
Good write

Excellent piece. I adored the seemingly perfect progression and strong, lascivious tone of voice.

A pleasurable read, nonetheless. I hope you all the best and take care. ~Debbie

That is so adorable... I hope you don't mind if i put that in my poem book? Lol i put all my poems in there along with other poems i really like.. N e ways, i really liked it. SOO cute. 5/5

After reading that other wonderful poem of yours, I just had to take a look around at your other stuff. I really like this a lot. I don't usually go for poems that are just in one big stanza. Call it a personal preference. However, this is just so well written that I have absolutely no criticism of it whatsoever.

Brilliance. A joy to read.

This is a really good poem.I liked it a lot.I read some of your other poems and they are really good too.Keep up the good work.You are a great writer.

Kelsie

This cought my attention from the beginning and kept me reading until the end. I really like it. the flow is catchy, i guess you would say. it's mesmerising and enthralling.
basically, i really liked it.
5/5

Fantastic. the beat was spot on, the word choice was perfect. keep up the good work.