I LIKE THIS STYLE really good stuff . thanks 4 all your comments.means alot to me
my friend koriey writes like this check them out start with 8:11 thats my fav by her the rest of her stuff is good but deep
sometimes too deep for me. you write like her in a couple of your poems

Again with the sm. world i just wrote new one and so did you crazy huh/

I got one more good one for you by janica its called when my days are filled with gloom

I checked out all those poems they were awesome

I've never seen a poem done like this. great job

your servant:
david