This was a really nice poem...keep writing

Ok so i love this poem its true in so many ways.....best one i've read so far :)

I like your poem. It was good and filled with a lot of emotion. I can relate to some parts of it and I think that makes the poem even better. Good job.

Wow this is really good it made me feel like you were feeling trust me i know what u mean i recently lost someone the same way

Wow, i really loved this poem! well written has a great flow and great describing words that bring out the best in it. and i LOVED the ending it totally fit and i know how endings can be hard but this one was awesome!!congrats on a fine write!
i'd love it if you read the rest (or soem more) of my poems and commented/rated them. thanks alot!!

This was beautiful.
It was very emotional, and I liked that.
You're a great writer.
Keep it up.

5/5

I liked it a lot =] It was definately from the heart. Keep it up.

Laycie~have to say, i like this one the best, its deep, emotionoal, and beautiful in a hauntingly accurate way. my poem, second anniversary that you commented on, is written from experience...so...yea.

I know how you feel...<33333 you deserve five threes on your heart

Hey!..i liked this 1 a lot...it's beautiful!...u r very talented!...kp writing!
Tk care.
xxPoojaxx

Good job and thank you! Have fun keep writing. ^_^ 5/5

This is simple but very well written poem. Filled with lot of emotion & love. Enjoyed reading this one!

Wow...
This poem... It's fantastic.
XD
It's friggen sawwsummm...

Its a great poem..
nice flo.. i love it!!!
<33 <33
amanda

THAT IS SO CUTE I LUV THIS POEM!!!

Wow! Great piece! It just got more and more powerful as I read on. AMAZING ending! Loved it! Thanks for all your sweet comments...really made my day...looking forward to more of them! :)
Charisma*

I liked this poem a lot. the emotion behind it seems unquestionable. the only bad thing i can say about it is the rhyme scheme is a bit messy. overall though, good work. :)