TAKING ME AWAY

by ashley   Apr 15, 2007


I give you my heart
its soon ripped apart

I give you my trust
its quickly broken to dust

a relationship full of stress and strain
filled full of hidden shame and pain

the first to always slip and fall
and smash their life in a wall

hating debating having no clue
not sure what I'm going to do with you

drinking and sinking causing more hurt
my hearts the first to be buried in the dirt

its not like i matter or anyone cares
just act like you dont know keep on the glares

done with arguing and useless fights
tired of standing up for my rights

I'm making myself sick in so many ways
I'm tired of living pain filled days

do i make a difference because i cant see
what the ***k has happened to me

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  • 16 years ago

    by elliianna

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  • 17 years ago

    by Julienne

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