This is a very sweet and cute poem. It had really good rhythm and great flow.

"Because of you I don't let the things everyone says get to me anymore."

On this you should take of the 's' on 'says'. Thats all I got. 5/5

I really liked the rhymes in this poem they didn't seem too forced and they flowed really well. A very cute, romantic type poem. It wasn't too mushy, it was just right.

This is real reall cute, and once again your rhyming wasnt forced and it had good flow. i really like it.
kaitlynx.

It's an amazing feeling to know that somebody is always going to be there for us, or atleast think they will be. Love is very special and very hard to find. An amazing poem 5/5

5/5 awe its so adorable.. something about it nearly gave me tears.. hehe. the 1st stanza really hit me. loved it. <3

AWww, cute, cute, cute.
The poem was really good. I found some rhymes that seemed a little force, but it was nothing. The flow wasn't too rocky but could have been better. You did a wonderful job!
God Bless 5/5
<3tayyy

Awh` that was just the cutest thing (: The last two lines seemed forced, like the rhyming, and so the flow kind of rocked a little, but that was really good .
..__MiNDYY

Wow, such a beautiful and great poem. I love it. Good job!

A great poem! very Romantic! I'll give it a 5! :)

I love this lines.. Actually my 'ex' said these lines to me in the past..

"Thank you for everything you've done
without you I wouldn't be complete."

Advance Happy bday :)

Awe a very cute poem! The words you used/chose were very nice, except for the rhyming ones. They seemed a bit over used (not in this poem but in other people’s) and in a few places forced. I loved the unique structure of this poem, it's very different from the standard.

Wow this one was really sweet to. Its really nice to have someone that you can depend on, and that you know will always be there for you. I liked how you made the reader feel some of the sadness but also all of the love that this person has for the other person in this poem. Way to go interesting peice. Nicely written.

Aww this is a really good poem. i really like it a lot. i think you did a great job on it! 5/5

~Kristina

The flow at the end didnt' seem to go with the rest of the poem but I really liked it..It is hard to get a poem to say what you want yet at the same time get it to flow with what you've got...Great job though..very touching and sweet..5/5
Tyanna

This seems more like a story
And less of a poem.
Advise:
Try not to use so much pronouns.
For example:
You take me by the hand and guide me through the night.
You can turn that into

Takes me by the hand
Guide me through the night.
Or something like that.

It was a good story and the flow keep going..i loved that especially the wording...keep it up
Well done
Laura

This poem is really cute. i like it alot. it remind me of me and my boyfriend =) good job