She fell to the ground.

by .+.unpretty_loser.+.   Apr 16, 2007


She couldn't be saved,
She couldn't be found,
She gave in
As she fell to the ground.

They rushed in,
Found her like this,
Why'd she give in
What did they miss?

How could they be so blind?
Why couldn't they see,
Under neath her smile,
was anything but happy.

Now she's gone,
An angel up above.
He's all alone,
He thought it was love.

She did too,
She just gave in,
Nothing left to do,
Emotions held within.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    This is really good! i love the emotion put into this poem! Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Siro aKa Gaara

    Enjoyed reading this poem. it had a really good flow, was quite short but got the message out loud and clear :)

    was an enjoyable read x

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Great poem =) You're getting a 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Nice one.
    Rhymed really well.
    Keep it up!
    Rebecca =]

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