I LOVE YOU!!

by Kalee   Apr 17, 2007


Sometimes when I am alone
All I want to do is cry
Cry because I love you
But you dont love me

I have tried to forget you
But that made my feelings for you grow
They have become stronger
And now I cant fake it any longer

I have to say it
There is no denying it any longer
If I dont it will eat at me forever
So here it goes the thing I have wanted to say for a year

I LOVE YOU!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by In love honey 1

    I really like this poem it is vary nice

  • 16 years ago

    by In love honey 1

    I love this poem it shose how long I was looke to say that to someone that I love and now I have found that someone to say that to.
    sinserly
    In love 636

  • 16 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey sweety..
    coolie poem... real cute and sweet...

    hope ur k love!!!
    ive done 2 new poems could u read n tell me what u think
    xhxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    ...what a bittersweet piece... I always adore neat poems which use simple word choices, yet gives off a pleasant effect towards the reader. This is no exception.

    "All I want to do is cry
    Cry because I love you
    But you dont love me"
    ^This could have been better illustrated if it was shown rather than told.

    "I have tried to forget you
    But that made my feelings for you grow"
    ^I can correlate with those lines thoroughly. (The harder I tried to forget, the stronger my feelings grow.)

    Overall, it's a nicely-written love poem. Adorable to say the least. Keep on writing. Good effort. ~Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is cute.. the idea is cliche but you did a nice job.. short and simple words but still you managed to capture you feelings and explode with a sweet and strong I LOVE YOU! at the end.. it was a nice touch.. nice job :D

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