I'll Never Let You Go

by The Tay   Apr 17, 2007


Cuddling and holding hands
Turning off the light
Telling me you love me
On this rainy night
Chills go down my back
Hand touches my cheek
Gently kissing me
My bodys going weak
You run your fingers through my hair
And gently bite my ear
I let out a soft moan
Releasing all my fears
We quietly make love
Very soft and slow
You whisper in my ear
I'll never let you go

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  • 14 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awww a very sweet poem, i loved the flow and rhyme of your poem,

    excellent work

  • 17 years ago

    by katie

    I really loved this. you described what was happening so well with out it being to intense. very well done. and thanks for the comment on my poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by just me

    U commented me and i always return the fav. so i just had to say i'm lovin this. it's like sexy but not to sexy u kno........i guess u can say it's sweetly sexy. lol.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Very cute indeed with an excellent rhythm to allow the flow to run smoothly
    5/5
    *Gem*