So scared, yet safe in your warm embrace
Resisted these emotions surging so strong
Giving into the magic of your loving touch
Wanting to give myself to you for so long

Cindy,
We did it again... :o))
I still remember the moment we thought abt this theme and the way it all seemed so tough but look at the way we did...it looks so beautiful here on site...atleast to me and i am sure to you too.

Great experince once again.....and i am sure lots more to come... :o))

all the best and take care

Oh well done to both of you. this poem was excellent. the two styles of writing melded together well. the love was amazing!

5/5 David

Well done again Cindy and Nitin! We are going to be accustomed to these nice poems from you and be spoiled! A joy to read.....keep 'em coming...lol 5/5 All the best, Debbie

Very good collab cindy, nice flow, i give it a perfect 5! keep them coming!!!

I do love the way your two styles entertwine. A well done piece on hard subject matter. Done very tactful and beautiful. I especially love the last stanza. Great job!

I'm speechless, this poem quite honestly took my breath away..
It's beautiful..
Well done you two, you've outdone yourselves yet again
5/5
*Gem*

"Look at yourself one more time in the mirror
Every inch of your skin will only reflect me"

Really what more is there to say? Brava!

"This love is not just meant for one night
Every single touch will promise you eternity
Look at yourself one more time in the mirror
Every inch of your skin will only reflect me"

This piece have, once again, took my breath away/ It was absolutely beautiful! It sensually demonstrates how two lovers become one... forevermore...
An enjoyable piece of work. a joy to read.
Well done you two!
Love,
Debbie

Simply superbly written by both of you. Love lingers on beyond eternity and you have displayed it really well in this piece.
Excellent.

This is so beautiful-it speaks so much emotion in its words and images. I see this is a collaboration-that is always interesting-the melding of two minds, two souls. Regardless this is a stunning work and very excellent. Words fail me to say how wonderful this piece is.

Gary Jurechka

Cindy the collabs that you and End Of Eternity have written are all awesome. This one really stands on it's own.

This love is not just meant for one night
Every single touch will promise you eternity
Look at yourself one more time in the mirror
Every inch of your skin will only reflect me

This stanza really blew me away. The two styles of your writings blend so well. 5/5
Keep them coming!

I just read that b4 lol my gosh you guys confuse me sometimes, but i'll say the same thing as i did to EOE for whoever wrote this lol the first stanza captured me and the second mesmorised, the whole poem was beautiful without a doubt, xox lithium

This is incredible! 5/5

That was such a good poem so beautifully written great use of words. great work to the two of u xx

I really liked this one...

Wow-O-Wow.
That was purely fantastic.
It was so beautiful & it left me speechless. =]
Two wonderful writers.
Your wording was beautiful & so unique.
Perfect - no other words. =] 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow, such a beautiful written poem with so much emotion in it. Very nice..

Beautiful poem , you did an excellent job and I loved the stanza, great write, thanks Tracy 5/5

Great Job about love.... The last stanza is

This love is not just meant for one night
Every single touch will promise you eternity
Look at yourself one more time in the mirror
Every inch of your skin will only reflect me
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