Awee this is so cute..I love it =]

Hi wats up???

Awwww! thats sooo sweet!!! i have finally got to talk to him!!! lol. ok..i will ttul

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xo kisses xo

Nice poem. i think you did a great job. 5/5 keep up the good work.

:) good job! 5/5

Ya i know! anywayz how r u doin???

:) Great poem! I loved it :D 5/5 from me!

I know right goofball!! lol soooo wait hes leaving 2morow???

My spring break just started and we are having 1 week off till i think its may3rd.. idk i am not sure anywayz so wut did u do 4 spring break?????

Thank you for the comment first off. And this poem as well for me relates back to a couple lost loves that I have experienced and it's been tough, and this just makes me remember. It is not bad to remember, but just a little sad. God Bless, Italia1921.

5/5 excellent. :) i commented on his, but i wanted to see your work. you two must have really had somthing special. you write really beautiful poetry the both of you.

this poem is amazing. i can relate to it too.. my "first love" i wont see for a long long time. its hard. :( its amazing to see im not the only one. wonderful write, its very touching. to me at least. :)

Ohh wait u work and o ya is that ur picture on ur profile??

I love it =)

Hey sorry I had to leave but I'm gonna post back real quick. I can drive but it is the level one lisence I passed the level two writing part and now all I have to do is take my drivers test, and I can do that in the next month. P.S. for IM all I got is hotmail-- night_hawk91@hotmail.com

Wow Sara.. simply amazing. Wonderfully written!! It describes the emotions so perfectly!! It's absoultely amazing, the way it captures the emotions. Great job for sure 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Hey wow.that's really good...That reminds me how i felt when I saw my first love after a period of 7 months soooo...I know how you felt...wow!!

Wow, that makes it sound like you pulled it from my heart because Im seeing someone thats like that to me. Your a great writer 5/5

Great love poem, i enjoyed it greatly.

your servant:
david

I like your poem your good

I like this poem. The last time I wrote a poem this good was ..quite awhile You're a good writer from some of your poems I've read. Keep writing =D