Hey this is very good, i like the style of it, well done xxx take kare xx

Well written poem love :)
yet very sad.
im glad to know that you didn't go through with it.
if you wish you should join this club:
Inner Pain: Life Depression, Self-harm And Eating Disorder
maybe it could prove helpful to you?
anyway 5/5 love.

You should never try to end your life no matter how hard it is because you're alive for a reason and that's because your mission on this Earth is not completed yet. Everyone here has a purpose whether it's a small one or large one because everything you do impacts the people that care for you. Someone always cares for you. This is a quote I made to help me hang on...

"Hold on and never let go because even the brightest of lights may drift away into oblivion sometimes..."

I love it...nice job!

Very good poem that I totally understand since I've been there more times then I care to think about and still am there =P Very great job at expressing the emotions behind it =) 5/5

Thank you for the comment on my poem by the way =) Each one always means a lot to me ^_^
Rhea