Vivid Memories

by BrokenREALiTy   Apr 17, 2007


I'm lying in my bed,
Staring into space.
Reaching out for memories,
Visions of your face.

Images of your smile,
Start to fill my head.
Tear ducts starts to leak,
As I lie awake in bed.

A familiar scent surrounds me,
And I can feel you near.
Close my eyes and imagine,
You standing here.

Trace your face with my fingers,
Run them over your cheeks.
I remember it like yesterday,
Even after the long weeks.

Searching for your warmth,
Our fingers intertwine.
Leaning in to hold you,
I can feel your breath on mine.

But then you disappear,
Without me, you fade away.
And I drift back to reality,
To live another day.
[c] 2O07 Mindy Huang

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  • 18 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    This is a great poem emotion and thought were felt great job i loved it very much keep it up

    laura

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Wow... that actually brought tears to my eyes! amazing... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent work...
    u've created perfect imagery thru your good choice of words n the emotion this poem has is very powerful n seen thru the lines...Perfect as it is
    Good job!
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    It all seems like a dream; reliving a memory. Quite a good portrayal here.
    I'm generally not keen on rhyme, but you used it well; not at all forced.
    On the third line of the second stanza, I think you either meant "get working" or "get to work" although if I'm honest both ways are quite poor English grammar.
    It was a simple write, but in addition I don't think it was written to be anything else. Thanks for sharing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    This is wonderful! you did an absolutely great job on it! you really have talent. keep on writing 5/5

    ~Kristina

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