Untitled (Haiku)
by MaSkEdSoUl Apr 17, 2007
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Ok this is my first Haiku, so be easy on me!! lol |
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16 years ago
Hey, that's pretty good. Nice job.
Josie -
16 years ago
Pretty good, I hate using the word THE I just started writing haikus also so keep it up. diamente poems are really fun too
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17 years ago
I liked this however it didnt seem to have much of a feeling, I think if you used some more descriptive worse it would sound a lot better. NIce job though for your first try.
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17 years ago
Interesting short but sweet, nice poem 5/5
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17 years ago
by Kaila
It should be an atual long poem lol i liked it though nice job
