Tomorrow

by freedom   Apr 19, 2007


This feeling is just to real.
This feeling hurts to bad.
So I close my eyes
And take my first sip.

Strike 1:
Its not working
I'm still hurting
all that pain and sorrow
i don't want there to be a tomorrow.
So i take sip number two.

Strike 2:
Whats happening
I'm dragging
Don't want two think
Don't want my heart two go clink.
So I take sip number three

Strike 3:
Its finally working
I'm not hurting.
I feel my self going limp.
And all my thoughts slip.
As i draw my last breath
I know theres nothing left
So i close my eyes
And go to rest.
Finally at peace cause i know.
That for me there will be no tomorrow.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Again this is another very dept emotion.. i can only noticed,, i think u are really depress coz mostly of ur poems are about sad. well dear dont give up no matte how depts what u suffering rightnow.. i love the way how write ur feels dear keep it up..5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    Very sad, but wonderfully written. Like I said before, great vocabulary. I really liked this stanza. "As i draw my last breathb I know theres nothing left" Keep up the good work. 5/5
    -Ally

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