Ally's View

by Beautiful x Disaster   Apr 13, 2004


I feel this was not getting enough attention under internet slang and I want to let people know that your best friend could be gone in a blink of an eye...

Tonight was the night I died,
The day I left my best friend’s side,
How it happened is very unclear
All I know is that it was my worst fear

I was walking down the street,
It was so nice out, I went with bare feet
I was to get the mail
Report cards came, god I hope I didn’t fail

Walking back to a place called home
Or I wouldn’t be writing this stupid poem
I was walking slowly
Little did I know people were soon to gather somewhere holy

Day turned tonight
Something did not feel right

I quickly turned around
There was a car with guys in it, all of them high
They passed; I was left on the ground
They are the reason I was to die

I lay there on the street of Gosh-en
Without a single motion
I started seeing angels telling me to come
I couldn’t leave; I had to say good-bye to my dad and mum

I went out cold
I awoke in a hospital, where my future was told
I could hear the doctor clearly; I was going to be fine
Little did he know, it was almost my time to shine

My mum came in
So did my Irish twin
They sat and held my hand
These two people are very grand

The said he needed a test
Then I needed a lot of rest
He gave me this pill
I went to sleep against my will

Suddenly I saw the room from a different view
I felt brand new

From the doctor I hear a sigh
My mummy is in tears
I guess it’s my time to fly
I only lived for 14 years

Later I watched my mum open my report card
The look on her face made it look so hard
With tears in her eyes, she looked so pale
This was the first time I didn’t fail

This was so hard to put on here, let alone write it...Votes and comments would be greatly appreciated...

R.I.P--Ally--
1-14-90--3-29-04
Always loved, Never forgotten

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  • 19 years ago

    by megan

    i love ur poem its really awsome