What Can I Say?

by King Of Contradiction   Apr 20, 2007


Well what can I say?
You broke my heart,
You ripped it in half,
You tore it apart.

Well what can I say?
You use to love me,
But not anymore,
It wasn't meant to be.

Well what can I say?
It feels like a dream,
That we aren't together,
And were not a team.

Well what can I say?
You made me sad,
You made me feel angry,
You made me feel bad.

Well what can I say?
It's just hard to believe,
That you did this to me,
It's getting harder to breath.

Well what can I say?
Nothing much I guess,
I can't say anything,
I'm just such a mess.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Amazing job...
    This poem hit me hard.... I'm going through my own mini heartbreak - so yeah...

    "Well what can I say?
    It's just hard to believe,
    That you did this to me,
    It's getting harder to breath.

    Well what can I say?
    Nothing much I guess,
    I can't say anything,
    I'm just such a mess."

    ^ My favorite 2 stanzas.... I can feel the pain pouring through every word... The flow was great & the vocab. was good...

    Superb write! Keep it up. =] 5.5
    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow. real deep and powerful poem
    the repition of your line really made a good effect
    all together it's 5/5
    I loved it!
    beautiful piece of poetry!

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