Does She?

by Curry   Apr 21, 2007


Does she treat you good like I did,
Does she show her feelings or keep them hid?
Does she kiss and cuddle with you,
Does she love you like I do?
What does she have that I don't,
What does she do that I wont?
Why did you choose her,
Are you two happier together than we were?
Does she comfort you when you've had a bad day,
Does she make all your pain go away?
What makes her so great that you had to leave me,
Are you and her really meant to be?
Is she the girl for you,
When you're gone,does she miss you like I do?
Does she dream about only you at night,
When you're with her,does it feel right?
Does she really care for you,
Are her feelings true,
Does she love you like I do?

Written by: Curry on 4.12.07

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is so sad. Your emotons really come through in your words.
    Good job!
    Keep writing.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so bittersweet.
    My favourite part was the last line, it has a lot of impact.
    I thought the flow was good throughout and the depth and emotion shine through the words.
    You did a good job with this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Awww ^.^ I really really like this poem. It has so much emotion. Made me feel like crying [reminds me of my last relationship]
    I have to say great job on this one. Xx Chrissie

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