I am slipping away

by Brittany   Apr 21, 2007


I am slipping away
Losing control
I am lost
In his eyes
The deeper I go
The more I know ,I never want to come back
I see his hopes, dreams and thoughts too
The deeper I go the more I know
I want all there is
I want to listen
So let me
I like you can't you see
It's as simple as can be
Deep in his past
I close my eyes
And listen
To his calm voice
Staring in to space
With a blank look on my face
I am slipping away
Losing control
The deeper I go
The more I know
I don't want to come back

This is about when i was falling in love with my guy friend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Beautiful..i really like the way its written..keep it up
    -elizabeth

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    Wow thats really good, and deep
    5/5 from me :)
    xxlish

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel

    Wow great poem! really well structed/written! congrats on a fine write!! keep up the good work.
    p.s. be sure to check my poems out and comment/vote please and thanks!

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