Boy in the picture

by Tara   Apr 22, 2007


The boy in the picture,
looks the like the boy in the world
the only difference is that
the real guy has a girl

the boy in the picture
is good hearted and fair
while the boy in the world
wouldn't give a care

they are two different people
they only look the same
for this understood mishap
the artist is to blame

the boy in the picture
does not speak a world in the day
but the boy the world
has a life thats all grey.

the boy in the world
how can he be so unsure
i guess its his fault,
the boy in the picture

**really crappy poem, like wrote it in lke 4 mintues! lol please comment**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    I love this! I really hope you dont mmind but I am going to copy it and print it to give to my best friend. She will LOVE it! I will wait a few days for you to coment if it is okay or not. I lllllove it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melly

    Lovely, i like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Well I liked it, a little choppy but.. still lovely.

    thanks for the comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by unique

    Its a pretty good poem i think.. Not one of ur best but its still ok. Keep up ur great work on all ur poems!