Wow this is very deep. i felt it right through me.
good job

Wow that was a good poem
and im also glad my poem gave you sum adivcee

Good poem. I thought it was really deep and had a lot of emotion behind it. Good job.

This one was very interesting.. your words flow with one another. A great job with this one.

As for my poems.. they all basically come from what I feel toward my family and some of them toward the one I am with at that moment. :]

4.8/5

I really loved this. amazing poem..

DAMN NUVIA!!!! yea i love that poem, truthfully its my favorite of yours cuz i know who you wrote it about and its funny cuz he will always know what he lost and cant get back. i love ya best buddy keep up the good writing.

This Poem is really strong and it has alot of emotion to it..
Btw thnx for commenting my poem

Hey i liked the way you wrote this one this is an awesome poem and u are a great poet. best of luck in writing another lovely poems...Keep up the good work!!!

You are an amazing poet.
you dont ever need to give it up.
keep writing so i can get the pleasure of reading what you wrote =]]

Wonderful flow and great depth. i feel the emotion and love the rhymes! keep up the good work =o]!