This made me cry.

It really hit a sore sopt but was an excellent poem.
It was for such a good cause and I really loved it.

Well done.
Flawless.

I admire you for writing about a subject that's so widely talked about for all the wrong reasons. it's nice to read something that's serious, but still positive. i don't know whether that was the intention, because it seems as if this was written straight from your thoughts and feelings, but i liked it.

as for it being submitted into a competition, there are a couple of lines that don't seem to flow as well as the rest of the poem; the last lines on your second and fourth verses seem a little short, but that may just be the way i'm reading it.

L.x

Great job, very well written and beautiful tribute to Breast cancer. 5/5 -Unattractive1

Wow. I wasn't sure what it would be like at first, but it turned out to be really inspiring. I loved the poem, and the way it was put across. Excellently written.

Take Care - Sole.

Very powerful and oh so true. People think of the pink ribbon as being a symbol of breast cancer survival when really it's just another reminder that anyone may be a subject to this deadly disease. Loved it. 5/5

This is a very good poem. It sends a very real message to the women who read this. I hope you did well in the contest.Excellent flow, well pinned. 5/5

I really liked the rhyme scheme The imagery brought the poem life to reveal a very important message

This was a beautifully sad poem, I admire you dearly for writing a poem on this subject. The emotion was strong and came straight from the heart. The ryhme scheme was nicely done and the imagery made me picture what you wrote in my mind which was great. Overall this poem deserves a 5/5 in my eye as it brang an important message to readers. Well done~mel

This is a fine piece of sad poetry, whereas its message is worthy of note to the unprejudiced reader. Its strong emotions have made me wonder if this was written by experience, I was rather surprised at the little note you left at the bottom. It began with dreary descriptions that which portray a vivid imagery, then I noted then that it transitioned to some "heart-to-heart" talk. It moved me in an indiscernable way. I guess from now on I'll have to take care of my body, mind and soul. =]
I love this poem of yours. Thank you for sharing!

Debbie

Very powerfull subject, and well written. i like this write. good work (:

Wow.
This poem is deep.
I like it.
I never would've thought that this poem
Would be about breast cancer.
But it seems more like a story
And less of a poem, though.
Anywayz,
5/5

Breast cancer is the problem, show me, don't tell me that problem. Crystal tear is over used and it's spelled color, colour doesn't make it look more artsy. Don't say title in poem, or change title.

Last line is good.

I loved it.
The message was clear to the reader.
The flow was flawless and rhyming wasn't forced.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

A very different and greatly expressed poem taht taught us something new, you have chosen a very unique subject to write about that is why it makes this poem the best.
I also like your word choice as they are greatly chosen words.
keep up the great work and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Excellent Piece, I love the way you made everything flow together. Keep it up the good work!

Wow this was amazing not at all what I was expecting, it totally took me by suprise. From the first two stanzas I thought it was going to be on depression or self hate or something like that then with the third stanza I changed my mind completely. Nice write, very original not something Ive read about before and you managed to do that in a very creative way. 5/5

A crystal tear drops from those golden brown eyes,
[[Creative "crystal tear" thing. I do not believe I've ever heard that before. =] And, I'd say "blue" instead of "brown" just because when I see the word "crystal" I think of a blue color...only a suggetion, though!]]

Ahh. This is ... oh my god ... beautiful. It hits home to the heart and makes you really think. I didn't know what it was about until the last stanza; I love when a poem does that.
Wow. Beautifully penned. Absoluetely.

xTheEcstaysofSuicidex 10.5

FANOMINAL!!! I know I said it before, but you are wise beyond your years. Fantastic... I have tears in my eyes..

Josie

Aw...really you did a truth from nowadays seen
Yes and breast cancer would ruin a girls life even though there is some cure for it
You really felt this feeling and your words were so suitable
Good job
Laura

I cried when i read this poem! its so good