Comments : My teacher

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I've had a teacher like this & they truly are a blessing to have.
    "A real helping hand
    Is my teacher
    Who makes me understand
    The present and the future"

    ^ So true. Whole poem was wonderfully written, keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Oh this one is great and stands out. U must be very lucky to have such a teacher.5/5 tc

  • 16 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    A special poem for a special teacher.

  • 16 years ago

    by Unwitted

    Foster when I fall
    Care me when I call
    Words can't do at all
    Describe such a teacher

    These lines are simply outstanding.

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awe, very sweet.
    I love the ending stanza.
    Plus, I could really feel your admiration for this teacher; very well written, I must say.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i never had a teacher like that. but this poem was so very thoughtful i thought it was such a delight to read your poems. the way you word them is just beautiful. and this one was as good as the rest 5/5 again

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem for some reason didn't really click for me. It was a little slow.. but idk. You did a great job at your flow. Your rhyming seemed a little forced. But your emotion was great. There's nothing really to critize besides your rhyming. Maybe it's just not my type of poem.

    Good Job

    4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    A true poem to a special person. I wish If I am a student of ur teacher.
    Great rhymes n the ending was outstanding.