This poem is sad, but a kind of beautiful sad. the imagery, flow and vocabulary help to make this a fascinating piece.

I loved this. Strong emtion all though it. You did an exceptional job. Keep up the good work 5/5 Nice flow, and well pinned

This poems beautifully sad, the emotion was strong throughout this. Very deep and sad.
The flow was Great & The vocab was also very strong and deep. A nicely penned poem. Good work~mel

I think this is very well written
Emotional.
And the best poem I've read so far today.
Only there could be some improvements made.
For example
You could erase just from this line
Is just to crawl beneath the covers.
I think it just seems to flow better :]

I believe your readers can correlate with this emotive piece, including me. I was fortunate enough to have broken out from this dreadful truth by translating myself. Like the person above me, I thought this piece has a tremendous potential to be augmented. 'Twas fine as it is though. It was sweet, yet sour at the same time. Sweet--because she never gives up; sour--because this 'twinge' still lingers within.
I like it very much. Thanks for sharing.
Debbie

Very good write. I really liked it. I could definitly relate to it. I think you did an exceelnt job keep it up 5/5
xoxo kaila

Awww. Very well written. I liked alot. its sad, but oh well. lol. I loved it. Well done. Xx Chrissie

I love tis peom it fits me to the t. I hope you will keep writing your very talented.

WOW that brought up some buried emotions it is a very thought provoking poem and I can relate to it very well keep righting your poems you have an amazing act for others.
Your friend Adele

Amazing poem. i loved it and also i could really relate because i go though it every day. everything went together perfectly and it was a great poem 5/5