This poem was excellent. I loooooved it. Body's rain = Brilliant.

The Angel of Secrets

Wow this poem is one of a kind! havent read anything with sucha strong mssage! and so true! i know this is a very heartfelt topic..you put it across beautifully with an excellent use of vocabulary...keep it up hun xx

Now this was a deep poem i really liked it and i totally agree especially with the sheep analogy me and my best friend have come up with that same analogy :)

ps can u read and comment my hearts nightmare 2 for me plz and thanx

Very deep and heartfelt, the flow was a little off in places but it was also very good, it was just very nice and the format was also great

Wow I really liked this poem. I liked how you showed that sometimes people cry when they are happy because people rarely ever show that side of tears. The first stanza was my favorite out of them all. I loved the metaphores. Well done. Very creative, and it really made me think.

Wow, i like it...........
specially the name that you have given for our tears; the body s rain.
this is a great poem with a great flow. keep it up. you are so talented

I had to read through this twice but the message of the poem was wonderful. The exsamples didnt really take into effect towards the middle but I liked the piece over all great write keep it up Plot121

An excellently written poem, you truly have a talent, keep up the superb work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Wow, just wow, that was amazingly written. I loved the flow and your choice of words. Great Job!

Peace, Joe

Wow....I don't really know what else to say. This was such a great poem and I think it speaks the truth. In my eyes society is crumbling. Political leaders no longer care for the people and the people are losing hope, but not love. *5/5*

Alyson

I thought this was good, and meaningful. I don't believe that we're sheep being put in cages, but I'm conservative, so we both probably have very different perspectives.

5/5

~*Alex*~

Excellent with great words with bigger n hidden meanings. wow 5/5

With love
Fsams

Wow, thats pretty deep.
I like it.

:)

Great job
i really liked it
very original
and it was something new
nice job

But what is love? Where is it from? Where can it be found?

i think love just happens. but i understand the reality behind your poem. that wastruth. take care. i will must give you 5/5

I agree with you - Freedom is the most important value after Health.
Money - is just numbers.

This was spectacular.
I have to say this is one of your best, by far. It was unique & creative. And the message was just amazing. Fabulous job. Overall: 5.5

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Excellent!

For this one, well i can such deep beyond it, the flow and imagery is good. I enjoyed reading it, I'd relate to it well.Nicely done

Keep on writing!

DEMOCRACY...........5/5 nice poem...too long but i love to read it....

"The political over rated world, does nothing at all,
For the powers are meant to bring happiness (it failed)."

^^ My favourite lines in the whole piece. I found them to hold so much power and depth.

I loved this, I found the whole piece to be beautifully and elegantly written, with an insanely great message behind the written words. It really makes the reader stop and think, and it's sad how every word is so incredibly true.

The imagery you portrayed in this piece was beautiful, it created very vivid pictures in my mind, and I thought the flow was good throughout the entire piece.

I adore the last stanza, it's filled with so much intenstity, truth and power that it hits the reader like a slap in the face.

On the whole, this was a beautifully written piece.