Like a Thunderstorm

"Your kisses are like soft sprinkle" = your kisses are like a soft sprinkle

Wow I loved this poem.. its so true love is so powerful and electirc that its like lightening and like a storm because no matter how hot and strong it is it can still bring us to tears. nice write definatly my favorite poem.

Very awesome poem. The words you used to descrbe it, were really cool. Like camo'ing it. lol.. I'm sorry, slightly hyper. lol.. Anyhow.. It was great. I've read alot of your poems, and you're a great writer, keep it up!!!
-Ally

"inside your heart." < shouldn't that be my heart? .. I'm not quite sure.

Anyway, I want this love. :D Lol. Badly. And, I think when someone can put into words how they feel, and what it's like .. well, they're just great. And, you did a great job doing so. Keep it up.

I adore this...
I love the metaphor you used, and the wording was a treat to read, as was the whole poem.
The flow was good throughout, the imagery creates vivid pictures.
You did a wonderful job on this.

Wow, great explaination of love, i like the flow...........
as always your poems rocks.
another 5/5 from me.