Hey first off i'll just tell you that you need to change this word "Alls" to "all"
I found this poem to be really cute and sweet although the structure was a little off the emotions were still strong, making this poem enjoyable to read. Well done ~mel

I love this
Only
I don't like that you used "alls".
It just ruins the whole flow of your poem.
I don't know if it was a typo, though.
Other than that 5, yo. :]

Good rythm. I like the repetiotion of certain phrases to get your point across.

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It was nice. Dreams and wants are alike and can happen if you dream and want enough.

Wonderful.
describes me perfectly.
and just made me realise how good i actually have it.
thanks you just brought my mood up ^
awwe. it's areally cute poem aswell.
and you two prob fit together.
as soon as you start writing poetry for/about a guy...it's...goood :)

I like this poem.
Although...
I don't like the slang "alls"
Maybe you could change that to all.
It would sound a lot better.
Other than that.
There's no mystery to it
But the format is fantastic.
5/5?

I just realized.
I commented on your poem
Two times.
Lol.
Sorry.
I'll comment on something else :]

"Alls I can"< that should be All. This poem as well woud have been better in stanzas, especially since you repeated lines. But, it was a good poem, just as your others. :D

Awwwwwwwwwwwww ^^
I feel like this too =) I really like this poem, it's so cute.. I'm really smiling right now.. lol xD Keep up the good writing! And if you have the time, could you comment one of mine =)?
xxx

What a cute poem. I really liked it. Very good write =}
5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Choppy rhyming in some places.. but i actually like the repetitions.. it has this sing song effect.. cute poem :)

Again I loved the poem, and this one was a bit more organized so I have to give you some credit for that. Now maybe you can try to organize it even more by working on the flow you have a lot of potential and I can't wait to read one of your future pieces!
5/5
kaila

Really good poem i love it! i cant wait to read more from u!!!!

Very beautiful.
This is what I feel towards my babygirl.
5/5

I know how it is to feel this way about someone and this poem describes it really well. The flow was sometimes a little off but otherwise it was great. I really liked the fact that it didn't rhyme, it was just a simple, honest "this is how I feel about you" poem. One little thing that should be changed though is the speeling in this line:

"Your always on my mind,"

"Your" should be "you're" Go on and call me picky, I know it hardly matters but it made me stop and disrupted the poem which was a shame cuz I really like it. Anyways, nice one.

Em xXx

Aww!!..love it!!!!
***aLy***

I can relate to this poem so much as well.. once again it was so powerful and well written. It's amazing that you've found someone like that... cherish them with everything you have... :) anyway another amazing poem :) 5/5