I think what you were trying to say behind this poem was really nice, although i found the structure to be off putting because some lines were short others long, it kind of threw the flow off. The vocab seemed a little to simple to be the word choice wasnt strong enough to bring emotion into it. I liked what you were portraying here though but overall i give it a 4/5 ~mel

The flow is kind of rocky.
It was easy to understand
There was no mystery in it.
I don't if I like that
I love poems with subtlety
But I also like poems with meaning
Subtlety=No
Meaning=Yes.
All in all.
It was very good.
4/5?

It seems like this poem gives and shows relief of being given that second chance. I liked it. It is relieving to express.

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Not the typical poem, but it's still really nice.
almost like a letter... :)
yep i like letters, and i def like this. ALOT. :)

I really liked this poem. I think it should have been broken up into stanzas, but it was okay how it was. You did a good job with it.
Keep it up.

Aww i like this poem alot..
i can relate to this.. the flow and words were really good in this. keep up the good work

For a young writer I found the emotion well written but agree with some of the others above about a little more structure. I like free verse myself though so I can relate to those poets who choose not to ryhme. keep up the good works..

This poem is great i love it