Solid Liquid and Gas

by Bogie   Apr 24, 2007


Far beyond not out of sight
A universe dark and bright
Scattered with life here and there
By every sparkle of light

Shining star stuff in a whirl
In the making of a purl
Like mother earth life ignites
By life giving divine lights

When solid liquid and gas
Come together as one mass
From the mix an ocean blue
Here amoeba grow and stew

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Just beautiful... You are incredible at rhyming, one of my faves for sure...

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    I want to thank Corinne for giving
    me the word that makes the last
    line work much better then what
    I had used.
    Thank you sweetie and write on,
    Bogie

  • 18 years ago

    by Corinne

    "W(h)ere amoeba grow and stew" :-)

    The last verse is my favorite

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    Haha this was so much fun to read. Such an orginal idea and highly creative, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    A tad strange, be it in an intriguing sort of way. Probably deeper than my brain will allow. A little insight from you could help that. I like it, I will read it more to try and further find the meaning.

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