I liked this poem the word choice was simple yet still held strong emotion. You did a great job on this poem portraying what it was that you were feeling and wanting your readers to understand and also feel. Good job~mel

Great poem, I really enjoyed it. My favorite part was:

'No one else is allowed in this place,
this is my room, for only me.
My mascara, teary-eyed face...
I come here so no others will see.'

Great job 5/5

Very nice and Yes i can deeply relate my room is like my sanctuary(sp?) I think you did a great job of showing how all our emotions are left in our rooms

I always cry in the shower, cause I share a room with my sister haha. I love this poem though.

Great poem and very true:) 5/5

Great poem! Good structure! I like the opening stanza it grabs the readers attention! well done! and yeah everyone go through trials in life :) well done! 5/5!

This was a good poem the flow was good I loved the message and images you made the reader gaze into were like a mirror and for that I gave. Good job Plot121