Wow, I loved this poem, The stanzas were short but yet held so much emotion. Simple yet captivating. Well done on an awsomely written poem. Good work~mel

This poem just took me and closed the door behind me as it lead me through another world, and when i finally arrived at the other end i didnt want it to stop! ok its quite an elaborate comment but your poem just swept me off my feet, truly amazing and i must congratulate you!!

xxxjulz

Simple, but got the message across very well for some reason i felt like it was direct lol i was like sorryyyy hehe... yer the stanzas were the same length it was good

xxx alex xxx

Hmm... THE REASON, why i read this coz its such great poem and all the lines from the beginning to the end it really impress me! excellent and great flow of emotion and i can honeslty feel that.. 5/5

thanks for sharing and god bless!

Awwww. Such a sad love poem.
I really liked the style you had to
this poem. Really creative. The
flow was fair. But very good poem.
God bless 5/5
<3Tayyy
^_^ ily

I expecially love how every stanza ens with it is you. Strong, and clear emtions. Good job, keep up the good work. 4/5

Well..I liked it but the emotion wasn't strong...Maybe if you used a little more detail and more vivid words..The best poems are those that paint a picture in the readers mind..4/5 b/c I think it has potential

:[ So sad.
<3 Ily.

Mk. This poem was quite good. It wasn't cliche, but it was. You know? Like, I could see someone using the 'Is you' part, but it came from YOUR heart, and it had meaning behind it from YOU. So, if that makes any sense, good. if not, too bad. Lol.

5/5
FoShoBby.

The poem didnt give off much affection.. for me anyways. it was very simple and little depth which didnt suit my tastes. I think it was too laid out for us, but the repetition was well done.

It was a great poem, but I feel like it can go longer. To me, it didnt seem like a good ending. Great use of repetition and had good rhythm. Keep it up!!

This is cute. I, however, felt like it needs to be augmented by adding emotions through vivid descriptions. Show, don't tell...
I like this piece though, it reminds me of the works of a famous English poetess. The way she wrote them were simple and plain, but an even deeper and more profound meaning can be extracted from the words when read between the lines. =]
Nice work, ma'dear.

Great poem. you managed to show and express feelings with little words. the poem was really good, along with the structure and the flow. i think you did a great job.5/5 keep up the great work.

The repetition was good, and the last stanza was powerful. Not my favourite poem, I didn't feel there was enough description, just seemed a little blunt. However, it was catching and strong.

Take Care - Sole.

Good poem.. I could feel the emotion.. i could relate to this poem.. keep up the good work!

Awhh this was sad:[ but it was a great poem. i love how it was real short but made a good point.

Hmm, this one seemed a bit choppy because the verses were so short. Other than that, this was a good poem. It seemed more like a sad poem than it did a love poem.

I liked this one and I liked how you started it all off with the same line yet it was different and I also liked how the verses were short and sweet. The only thing I can say is that I think this should go under sad poems instead of love.

Its ok, but its way too short

I thought it was a good poem
you said what you were thinkin
maybe it wasn't that deep
but I think it meant alot for you

Wow this is a really nice poem cuase it doesnt reallys ay what the reason is but you can tell i like it a lot