Just Another Messed Up Love Poem

by Israfel   Apr 26, 2007


You are the light in my world
That shouldnt be there
Youre what pushes back the darkness
I hold to with care
You are what inside my blood
Burns with fiery pain
You are who desires so
My prided soul to tame
You are what I long to hold
In sharp nails embrace
You are who I long to kill
Whose soul I need erased
You are who is destined
To bring forth evils fall
You are what brings hope into
The world and into all
You are who will destroy my world
With a simple strike
You are the human who will take
With your blade my life
And as it slides into my heart
With pain so unbearably true
All I can think as you fade
I hate
I hate
I love you

(This was for a story I was writing and never finished...)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Allanon

    Great poem. someone must have pissed you off pretty bad b/c you can feel the hatred in this poem. i like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Yea, it didn't sound like "Just Another Love Poem" to me. It sounded like a love poem gone evil, in a good way. Um...not sure that was what I meant to say....Oh well...it was very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    Beautiful poem xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Alyssa Marie

    Beautiful, I can relate to this poem.. You did a nice job:]

  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Good poem!