Wow...could feel the love flowing from every single word...great write indeed.

*Love And Lust* I am still wondering why i wrote that one... :o))

all the best and take care

Aww thats really amazing, i loved it! :) thanks for ur comment!

Very sweet. :D I love it 5/5!

Beautiful poem........i luv it..5/5

Very nice, moaning and all...i love it very much <3

I thought it was excellent. i couldn't help but feel power and emotion from your words

Very good, i can feel your passion in ur words

You are very talented... You go with your bad self... wow... This poem along with your others are awesome.....

Natalie

I like this poem Laycie. Well written and there is so much love in it.

Very well done.
5/5

I really like this poem, its so sweet, and full of love, I can really feel the emotion in it xx

I'm amazed of what you can do
And god i'm jealous my poems can never be as good as yours I must say u r gifted laycie GIFTED!!
Well,keep the work up and thx for the comment!!

Wow! Very.... nice and a very good read all the way through. You almost amaze me at the way you've said these words.
Keep writing! :)

Wow, very amazing poem, filled with love and lust...you had a great flow to it even thought some parts very just a bit rocky it all went togeher in the end

---tara

Hey i thought this was a realy good poem and i kinda know what you mean i mean becuase i had a girl that i felt the same way about.

Omgosh i loved this!