This is very sad. yet it is written with the hand of friendship. Great job showing your emotions.

I'm hurting the same as you,
But you don't quite understand,
I'm happy when you're happy,
Please just take my hand.

Loved this stanza. It gives the feeling of hope.
Take Care Cindy

This poem....wow so deep to the point that i ended up crying .....if only he would help me help me.....................

Amazing!

5/5 once again, keep up the good work!!!

x

Wow, that's deep. the flows great, and the imagery was nicely done.

I really love this one girl u got talent. keep it up.

Wow this poem is really really good! tis poem ahas a simple message yet calls your attentioon. the good thing about this poem is that it doesnt lose it at the middle or end. my eyes were glue to the screen without wanting to miss a single syllable. the poem had great emotion you could feel the person willingness and just wanting to help

Another great poem sweetie... and again i can relate...

Keep it ^

Love Paige
xoxoxo

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I love this poem it truley comes from the heart !!! : )

I like this, story of love, whether or not he loves u :) nice

I loved this poem it is soo sad thou but i still loved it

Theres such a simple erhyme scheme, I assumed it would be mediocre, but I was surprised to see a deeper talent within.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

I can relate to this poem you just put it in better words then i could have thought of GRREEAAT JOOOB!

Noelle

Thats really good so cute<33

Wow this poem is soo sad
you are an amazing poet