Would You Save Me?

[Please don't comment or rate this yet, I'm feeling iffy about the chorus; but if you MUST say something, just message me]

[EDIT: i hate this poem. i will fix it very soon. promise:)]

I don't know because I'm weak
now you see the secret in me
-I stutter when I try to speak-
This lonely girl stay trapped within me

Demands in vain are slightly taken
as in pain (must re-awaken)
a sleeping heart from sake and soul in
sanity has got me breathin'

If I stumble in this dream
would you listen to my scream
Would you dry the tears that stream
down my cheek because I'm weak

You know you're lethal to me
So let the poison spill
You know your words can weaken me
that your disesase can make me ill

I'll drop the last one on you
and fall from where I came
on my back I speed through nothing,
and watch you win the game

If I stumble in this dream
would you listen to my scream
Would you dry the tears that stream
down my cheek because I'm weak