Good poem, one of the problems you are having on this poem is you over used the word "it" way to many time ,the poem itself was very good , need to use caps on the beginning of the sentence other than that you did a good job, keep it up,, your friend Tracy

Nice poem 5/5 keep up the good work Steve

WOW i loved it!!! quite long but def worth the read =o]. amazingly done!!! ps. thanx 4 the feedback

Gr8 poem! very sweet && cute =]

Awww. i love it. Very sweet. I actually had this little movie playing through my head of them kissing and fighting and her sad and all......
lol
<3
L.C

HEY...
loved it i can relate to that w/ my ex...

julia...

thx for the comment on mine:)

I like your descritions and metaphores of your love tree. The poem flows well n its with intense feelings.

I love this.
:]
5/5.
i would have given you a 10.
but sadly the world doesnt think we should give people tens.
:[
lol. keep it up.

Masik

Masik

Wow wat a sweet and lovely poem! your poem is so cute, i love it. Keep it up 5/5

Wow, such beautiful poem. i loved each line of it and i loved the repetion "it was underneath out love tree" alot