Wow that's deep. The ending kinda suprised me. The end was also slightly confusing, but the rest was really good. It was an awesome poem and I think that I get the message behind it. Great job.

Hehe...thats a wonderful poem. Somehow I knew you would end it like that, I don't know but most of you're poems have twists to them and you leave with something suprising. So I guess I guessed it:P But its a really awesome style, it's what makes this poem worth more than a billion votes and more than a billion rates. But oh well, I can rate only once:( I hope that's ok...

Wow... this poem is truely spectacular.. it begins really wonderfully, you describe the romance and the love the man feels in the poem making it seem as if he is head over heels in love... the twist comes at a perfect time with the perfect element of unsurness when you say

"What kind of monster ruins a friendship
That has lasted three long blissful years
And gives that beautiful girl an email
That puts her on her knees in tears"

you kind of hint to the reader that the monster is you contunie doing so until at the right moment you reveal the monster is you..

a very enjoyable read.. keep up the great poetry :D

Wow. I really loved this poem, especially the end. I can relate to it, kindasorta. And, I'm sure a few others can as well.
It's a different subject than I've read before, a lot of your poems are.. WHICH I absolutely love.
You did a wonderful job with this poem; great emotions and descriptions as well.

5/5
Super!!

I actually got goosebumps!!! Nice work..

Josie

I really enjoyed this.
The opening was beautifully done, really pulled me into the poem and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
I found the ending to be very intense, and also somewhat of a twist, which surprised me.
Beautifully written.

That was a superb poem
very beautiful

Another great poem, you have a gift for poetry

Wow! I love it! Sucha powerful piece of writing. The imagery is great and I like the ambiguity of the poem. 5/5

Twisted twisted, twisted wonderful! I enjoyed reading this pom.

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To be honest, I didn't like this at all.

I don't know..it just seemed..rushed, sort of like you started it but then continued half heartedly.

I didn't like the rhyming it seemed cliche and I thought you could have used more imagery throughout.

I enjoyed the closing stanza, but the rest of the piece just seemed weak to me.