Comments : Dream girl

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Sweet i found the first stanza really ahrd to understand though lol good job anyways xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Ahaaa aftr long time, but as good as always...
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very nice poem. There is someone in your life for you. Great job!

    A dream girl for my life
    Somewhere is in the earth
    My eyes try to capture her face
    Hope one day she will come in my life

    She will cone :)
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by *Broken Tears*

    Wow that was amazing. Keep it up, 5/5
    Sara

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really enjoyed this poem alot, For such a short piece of poetry the emotions were portrayed beautifully and strong. Well done on a nicely written poem~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Awww thats sweet.. very nice poem.. short but sweet.. keep it up =] and thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very nice work, i'm sure she is out there somewhere! keep up the good work!
    God Bless

  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    I can't say anything wow man
    you are so talented am note joking

    keep on doing what you doing :):):):)...

  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    I love it >>>>>>:):):)

    gooooood worc thou

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Realli good. 5/5
    thanx for the comment on my poem.
    manda

  • 16 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    My Dear Excellent work and a good flow of poem.... I enjoyed and love it. ....:) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Dream girl of yours.. It is nice to think and wait is there this special guy/girl somewhere out there waiting for us..

    Sometimes people's dream are unrealistic.. Some people's dream girl is just a girl who could show some love..

    This poem is sweet..romantic love poem.. :)