ALONE

by Imani   Apr 28, 2007


She sit home alone
moms at work dad is gone
brother is married liven with his family
but yet she's alone
problems she have
issues thats never solved
friends that she ain't sure that are friends
but yet they say they are
why do she feel this way
for what she heard
she got problems so whats that got to do with her being alone
for all she want is somebody their for her
to hold her
to hear her
to even understand her
to make her feel wanted
to make her feel heard
thats all she wanted
a real friend a mom that might stay home
a father thats their
a brother that can visit
a lover that will make her feel good inside
if she had all that she wont feel alone

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I like it, I have a poem thats like this but way different, but like the same meaning. Okay on some lines you need to fix them like

    On the first line I think you should write "She sits (with an s) home alone"

    Line 5 you should probably say 'problems she has'

    Line 9 does would sound better than do

    And in some lines you have two different subjects like on this one: "she got problems so whats that got to do with her being alone" You should have it

    She got problems,
    So whats that got to do with her being alone?

    Like that but other than that it was great, I got the whole point of it.