About To End

by Kitten3   Apr 28, 2007


Her porcelein skin
Turned red
Her trusting heart
Is dead
Her beautiful smile
Disappeared
Her lasting faith
To many tears
Her soothing voice
Went quiet
Her perfect life
An endless plight
Just for once
She wants to get it right
But she knows she won't
Her shining eyes
Have grown dim
Her fight for life
About to end
She'll never have to
Ever fight this life again

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem , very strong, and I like the flow
    Her shining eyes
    Have grown dim
    Her fight for life
    About to end
    very well done, like the writing style, keep up the good work,,,,,5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    This is really good. i love it. it's very powerful using few words.
    btw..thx for the cmt.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    This is pretty good.. maybe you could read one of my poems?

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