My poem to you!

by lookin4the1   Apr 29, 2007


Mental torture running through my head,
from these words that you have said.
why couldn't you tell me the truth b4?
why wait till we hung out no more?
you never told me that you felt the same,
just made out it was part of the fantasy game
Y did u wait so long 2 admit how you really felt?
it's too late now the cards have already been dealt.
All I can do now is shake my head,
you don't realize the importance of what you have said!
y do guys wait until it's too late
to admit how they truly feel?
Is it cause of their emotional state?
you really just don't get it at all
you play the game and set someone up for a hard fall
only later to reveal you also fell.
It would have been alot easier 4 u if u did tell!
I gave u that poem that said it all,
left it in your hands, it was your call,
tho u told me you couldn't commit;
but my heart you had already lit.
the timing was always wrong,
even tho we have so many songs
so many memories that were made
sum stay while others fade
once only the timing was right, at the drive thru
that was a sight
waited for you I did,
all along your feelings of love for me you hide,
the time I waited was enough,
plenty of feelings it was getting to rough.
I wanted someone that would give me more,
you had played with my head too much already, but i felt like I kept hitting a wall.
So I decided 2 give someone else a try
n to you i would have to say goodbye.
now i hear from you 2 yrs later,
you tell me you love me, it made me feel as if you were a traitor.
you had your chance, you gave it away,
I don't know what you want me to say?
Do you expect me to give up my relationship for you?
even though I gave you a chance already and blew it you did do.
what will happen only time will tell,
though me and you won't forget our we both fell!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm to whom u dedicated ur poem...? i appreciate how u write atleast u try., though its not really impress me and some are not really properly wirtten well and some i think the structure wasnt good... but although, i think it works more better so just keep on writng all what u feel coz i know sometimes it helps us to prevent or to be feel free the way we express our feeling thru writing.. so ireally appreciate ur work... and dont get me wrong coz i honestly like ur work from the bottom of my heart..

  • 18 years ago

    by x Mo x

    I don't like how you didn't spell out words, but instead used numbers or letters. Also, your grammar wasn't all there. The idea was sweet, but the structure wasn't.

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